What Do You Think About Adding The Sentence Bellow To My Cv Under The Point Career Objective?

the sentence is “Looking to join a progressive organization that has the need for Executive Secretary and offers opportunities for advancement” end of statement.
I am applying for a position which is Executive Secretary in Potrolium Company. I would like you to check the above sentence in its language and grammar. is it suitable to be written under my Career Objective in the CV. please ( help )

1 comment to What Do You Think About Adding The Sentence Bellow To My Cv Under The Point Career Objective?

  • Jeanne R

    “I am looking to join a progressive organization that has the need for an Executive Secretary and which offers opportunities for advancement” end of statement.
    I don’t mean to be rude, I think that your ambition is a fine one. But you should get yourself a book on grammar and punctuation and study up a bit if you would like to be an Executive Secretary. You should also brush up a bit on spelling. Below has only one “l”.

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